There
is a small thread in the movie "Throw Mamma From the Train"
where Billy Crystal is trying to write the beginning of a scene
or book. He is trying to hammer out the all important first line,
the one the sets the scene with as few words as possible. He struggles
with some relatively bad lines like;
"The
night was damp yet warm
"
"The
night was cool, but not cold..
The
opening lines would get longer and more complicated, not only
losing themselves in their complexity, but also losing the goal
of a simple first line. Crystal gets so lost trying to set the
scene that he never gets around to what he's writing about.
Finally "Momma", the augmentative abusive woman that
the Danny Davito character wants the writer to kill, comes up
with the first line the man is looking for.
"The
night was sultry! Sultry!" Then immediately starts haranguing
the poor writer. Crystal is so shocked, angered, and appalled
that he actually tries to strangle "Momma". The simple
line shocked me. I had been completely taken in by Billy Crystal's
struggle. When I heard the line I mentally left the movie and
thought "of course. That is too simple."
Writers
block isn't kind. I spend too much time trying to break that all
important first line in. Drawing is the same, I spend too much
time trying to break "that" all important first line
in as well.
Now
is the time though. We've just entered into a stretch that I call
the "back yard" of summer. The truth is, these hot summer
nights are my most creative, especially as we head into August
and September. So now I'm dealing with a hot summer night and
feeling rather creative.
This
night is indeed sultry.
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